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My Long-distance Love Affair by ~still-gale


It's been so hard since you've gone away
And I don't know if you're okay
The old songs still bring tears to my eyes
But I don't know if you could hear my cries

Though I still long for your embraces
I wanted to break free

But if you could give me one more reason
I'd hold on to it with my life
If you could give me one more reason
I'd fight for it with every breathe that I take
Just one more reason
I'd give it all of me...


The longing's hard because I don't feel you
I don't feel you still give a damn
So I just wanted to hear you telling me
If you still care or if you really did care

Though I still long for your embraces
I wanted to break free....

But if you could give me one more reason
I'd hold on to it with my life
If you could give me one more reason
I'd fight for it witrh every breathe that I take
Just one more reason
I'd give it all of me...

Still believing in you and me,
but I don't know if you're still there
It's hard to hold on with something unreal
If we'd break free then we could both breath
Yet I don't know
I don't know....
But if you could give me one more reason
I'd hold on to it with my life
If you could give me one more reason
I'd fight for it with every breathe that I take
Just one more reason
I'd give it all of me...



I look at your pictures and smile
Cause your eyes still whisper
I love you like yesterday
©2008-2009 *degrees-of-love
:icondegrees-of-love:

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:iconhercorkkyness:
i cant say anything but: beautiful! =]

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"When you hear the word love do you think of me?"-TKA
:iconsomethinginspired:
The desperation really rings out well. I like the style, and repetition brings the points home. Nice use of words and elipses to show the uncertainty, I like this very much. If I had to critisise (sorry my spelling terrible), I'd say it drags on a bit, maybe certain parts could be cut down (although the whole point of it being long may be part of the desperation and uncertainty elements, I suppose). Overall, it's a good piece of work, think I'll come over to your gallery and have a look.

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Only skin and bone, I fight my battles with words, my only weapon.
:iconcarzygirl:
this is on my fav

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x.catherine.x
:iconstill-gale:
OMG thank you! ^-^

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i want to be somewhere i could see the road,
a place where everytime you breathe, a wish comes true.

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July 16, 2008
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